Why do I write Quirt and Brody?

All the 30 years I trained horses is tied up in the reasons why I started writing Quirt and Brody. Writing is a way to re-live and share some of the adventures I had riding and training horses. I also enjoy a little paranormal, science and magic and try to incorporate that in my stories in a Jonny Quest style. Maybe extreme Jonny Quest. I don’t remember even him being in such trouble as I put Quirt, Brody and Suki in.

I set up some dangerous characters for the family to stay one step ahead of because I enjoy suspense too. Even to keep my interest, I felt the stories needed more than riding and ranch work to talk about. The other books I’ve seen where kids ride horses, there is a rich kid, Barbie doll, snotty element and I am not interested in writing about teenage drama of that sort. Not everyone, most in fact, who owns horses are rich. In my stories, Quirt’s family had to have some money to enable the kids to go on more adventures, but it’s not about the money.
Quirt is spoiled rotten, Brody came from an average single-working-mom family situation, and Suki was poor and on the run with her criminal father for three years after he killed Suki’s mom, Aiko.

Welcome

I never saw myself as a writer at all, only a few years back, [still don't]  but after I couldn’t ride and work with horses like I used to, I wanted badly to write about the adventures I had those three decades. I also like anything paranormal and character’s I love being in danger. More recently, I had a lot of fun going along as photographer on a local Arizona’s town ghost hunts and helping the guide.

As these stories came out, it wound up being a combination of the two with things. Living and working with horse-s and ghost hunting. The stories contain adventures and situations that I actually experienced, with fictional twists that include ghost hunting, bad guys and maybe a tiny amount of romance. [something i was sorely lacking during that time]

The books are not about me or even a character based on me, but the characters are based on a combination of people I knew and rode with, only for my stories I made them teens and one rich [to finance the adventures] The horses are based on horses I owned and what they do is as close to reality as i remember most of the time. Names have been changed, or at least switched around, to protect the innocent or unsuspecting. I actually started writing in 2007, but took some time off for marketing research and to practice ‘writing’ since i had no idea. Now, at least, I have an idea, but I am very far from an expert. As long as what i write reads smoothy, keeps interest [at least my own] and the action is perceived clearly – I’m good.

Those were the best days – and I am enjoying remembering them as I write these stories.

Mia

Snippet from ‘Rattlesnake’

Quirt and Brody Ride #1 Rattlesnake Book Cover

Quirt and Brody Ride #1 Rattlesnake Book Cover

Once away from the predators, Cactus found a nice patch of weeds and went no farther. Archer and Pickles ran straight home. As they went, they slowed to a trot, and then, tired, walked the rest of the way in. The horses were walking quietly when they approached the back gates to the Farnsworth Ranch.

Archer put his head down to eat grass by the gate, but Pickles, being the barn sour nag she was, paced at the gate and whinnied at the other horses in the barn.

Around midnight, Mary had just finished milking the last goat and went to the main barn to see if the kids had come back. She saw Pickles and Archer at the gate with empty saddles.

“Oh no! I knew it – they are in trouble, lying someplace out there all alone!”

Mary ran to the gate to open it wide for the horses. Then she ran back to the tack room and screamed over the intercom. “Mark! Mark! The horse’s came back without the kids!”

“I’ll be right out, Mary.” he answered from Chuck’s cabin.

Pickles came first with Archer soon after and went to the hitching post where they were used to being unsaddled. Pickles was finally too tired to even lay her ears back at Archer.

Mark came out right away to help Mary pull the saddles off. “Mark! Suki’s saddle is all cut up.”

“Oh no.” Mark scratched his chin, looking the saddle and the mare over.

“I knew it!” Mary said out loud what he was thinking. “They must have run into whatever has been killing the cattle. MARK! What if her saddle got that way while Suki was still on it?”

Mark hugged her, “We’ll find them.”

“Alive?” Mary said with venom in her voice. “Will we find them alive, Mark?”

“We will, we have to!” Mark tried to reassure her and himself too.

They left the saddles and equipment in a pile next to the hitching post and took the horses in the barn where they would have better light to look them over. Mary gasped, “Oh Mark! Look at her belly!” She pointed at several long gashes. “She was attacked by something really big!”

“Her legs are all cut up too.” Using the barn phone, Mark made an emergency call to the veterinarian to come and treat the mare’s injuries. Then he called Larry at his cabin.

“Larry, the kids’ horses came home without them with injuries! Find someone to tend to them and meet the veterinarian – Dr. Hanson is already on the way. Round up everyone else to help with the search for my kids.”

“I’m sorry Mr. Farnsworth. How long have they been gone?”

“Tom and Doug saw them leave before dark and we haven’t seen them since.”

“Oh no, Sir, just tell me what you want me to do.”

“Gather up any of the other hands who are willing to help with the search.”

“Of course, we’ll all want to help.”

“That’s good, take anything that’s four-wheel drive, the ATV’s too and get some riders on horseback to track where the kids’ horses came from. Look for Quirt’s mule too; he’s still out there someplace. Maybe he stayed near where the kids are. Keep in contact with the radios, channel 4 and the cell phones.”

“Yes sir.” Larry called Chuck first and then went down his speed dial, waking everyone.

Tom ran across the parking area and jumped in a dark blue Jeep Wrangler. He had his phone out making calls to the other hands, arranging who was gonna drive what and who was gonna go on horseback. Only a few hands had homes off the ranch, so most would be there to help right away.

Mary and Mark put on helmets that had communications built into them. While he barked orders at the others, the helicopter warmed up.

“What could have happened?” Mary asked again, desperate for answers.

“I don’t know Mary, but we will find them.” Mark answered.

“I’m really worried! They just aren’t the kind of rider’s who horses come back without them. They could be laying out there alone and injured or . . . worse.” Mary started to cry.

“Don’t let your mind run away with you honey, we don’t know what happened yet – and I’m so sorry I didn’t listen to you sooner – and I hope, whatever happened, that you and the kids can forgive me someday.”

Comment receive on my ben 10 fanfic

 

“awesome story. any chance on a part 3? i like how you put Ben in danger cause he gets away with out a scratch to many times in the real story.” ~Comment from heartbreakerninja on Fanfiction.net

 

I am mean to the characters, I know :D I’m mean to Quirt and Brody too.

i would love to write a part 3, I’m thinking on it.

Comment on DA about one of my fanfic stories

“An amazing ending to a great ben10 story damn this should be cartoonnetworks next animated movie or str8 to dvd or something man while reading it i envisioned every detail like i was watching the shown GREAT JOB TRULY AN GREAT JOB”

by tRUjusTICE001    http://trujustice001.deviantart.com/

Apples

A great pony from the past. Apples ran barrels and poles like the wind, better really since the wind can’t turn on a dime and give you back change. Even though she was only 12.2 hands tall, she could jump 3’4″ constantly. When I outgrew her, I used her as a lesson horse for kids who wanted to learn to jump and/or compete in Gymkhanas.   This is Apples
Apples

A special horse

Hawkeye & the Author competing in obstacle driving

Hawkeye & the Author competing in obstacle driving. Hawkeye is the amazing horse who I base all my thoughts and writing about Brody's horse "Archer" in my stories.

Okay, what kind of ‘help’ is this. MS Word 2007 ‘Help’

When I write, the first drafts, and second third etc I just make straight breaks between paragraphs. Then i go back and indent all the paragraphs at once when it is ready for someone else to read and hopefully edit it.

I’ve done it before, and know how to do it with Open Office, but because of publishing formats I go back to word when its getting close to being finished. I’ve done indented the beginning of all the paragraphs at once in MS Word too, but I’ve slept since I did it last and don’t remember.

I typed “indent first line of all paragraphs”
in the help search.
the results were:
“Troubleshooting Short Battery Life”
“Use and configure your Bluetooth enabled headset”
“Install a Blue tooth enabled device on this computer”
and four more things that had nothing to do with what i was looking for.
They didn’t have ANY of the keywords i used. How come it seems like what used to work, doesn’t anymore since i got my new ’64 bit’ computer.

screen cap

It’s probably not the computer, so what is it? I’m still typing English, and have everything set for English. Could I be becoming more inept or senile already? I eat my whole grain cereal and take my Ginkgo biloba every day.
My goodness.
Well, I still don’t know how to do it, So instead of ranting and raving anymore or using Windows/ms office help, I’ll randomly check on any one of dozens of websites that have nothing to do with microsoft and the answers’ll be right there.

Quirt and Brody have a fan site at Facebook!

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Quirt-and-Brody/128024183956579

The most exciting part of writing

The most exciting part of completing a story, is not finishing it, but having someone else read it.
~Chloe, Smallville

I am now the proud owner of Crystalquirt.com

I don’t know why really, except I liked being crystalquirt. It is the name that I wrote most of the fan fiction under.

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